Assalamualaikum....hai there!!


Well, this is my first Public Speaking practice for happy news. I put three audio that I think that's the best three that can be acceptable... =)
I hope you can leave comments so that I can improve my happy voice. Thank you and hoping that you will enjoy it... ^_^

The text:
Hackey baby girl born 1.11am on 1/1/2011
A Hoxton family is celebrating the arrival of a bonny new girl born at 1.11am on January 1, 2011.
Victoria Cording gave birth to her third child, Olivia Daniels, at Homerton Hospital in the early hours of New Year's Day.
The 23-year-old of Provost Estate, Murray Grove, said she and Olivia's father, Kirk Daniels, 25, were delighted to take home their new addition.
"It's brilliant. She's very good. She doesn't really moan, only when she wants feeding," Victoria said.
Olivia was one of the 14 babies delivered at Homerton Hospital on New Year's Day.

This is my first public speaking practice (happy news) :

This is my second public speaking practice (happy news) :

This is my third public speaking practice (happy news) :


Please leave your comments here:

shira: haha...sounds happy..but you talk too fast, I can't understand what you talking about..anyway, good job.. =)

Fara: three of it sound happy and almost the same. hehe

AMY:

  1. volume- i need to control the volume of my voice. and I'm talking too fast which i need to learn how to slow down a bit.
  2. pitch-I'm talking too fast
  3. rate-there's happiness in my voice, need to practice more.
  4. emotion- i can hear the happy emotion in my voice.
  5. pronunciation- i admit that there is some mistakes in the pronunciation which i need to improved more.




FARA:
  1. volume: the volume is okay and I can hear the voice clearly.
  2. pitch: you talk to fast and its hard to me to understand the news.
  3. rate: you sound happy.
  4. emotion: from your voice i can imagine that you are smiling.
  5. pronunciation: there are some pronunciation error in you record.


SHIRA SAYS:

  1. volume-I think the volume is litttle bit slow.

  2. pitch-the pitch is okay, but you need to slow down your speech.

  3. rate-the rate is quite okay

  4. emotion- you sound happy

  5. pronunciation- you must keep practice to improve your pronunciation